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Old 03-29-2004, 05:38 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by Vampyr
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Threads of time intertwine,
Slipping, sliding,
Finally unwraveling.
I want you to be mine,
You're just out of reach,
And I cant seem to find,
The words that I seek.
The threads have split now,
Lost in a million yarns.
They're too large for the needles head,
For my heart.
I lost it before I could find it,
Your hiding them from me,
In your river of shadows,
and your wall of tears.
You've stolen my thimble,
torn my quilt,
Broken my fingers,
And they bleed...
Pin prick blood stains on your soul.
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What do you think, Stu?
Very nicely done. I can actually relate to this poem...which is uncommon. +rep

+rep JS, you're far more talented than I am at poetry...good stuff

+rep Germy, I liked it
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