For some reason I just got around to reading this thread.
But that was an awesome poem, Kyuzo. It was like each line could be quoted, and someone would think you were incredibly deep and profound. I especially liked the last three lines.
I'm a great advocate of writing poetry. Only most of my poems are songs, because I have a band I write for. I would post them...but I'm worried they could get taken.

I wouldn't mind if they were all just written for fun, but my band needs them.
I award thee one reputation point.