The guy above makes me very afraid when he postes the stuff he knows about peeps in the forums.
He also writes fanfics and is up to chapter 7 in Zelda..which was great by the way...although I felt he should have given a little bit more detail on how the leader of the Corithians that attack village died. Sure he was dispatched but a little more detail wouldn't have been bad.
Also the part the arrow at the wedding felt a little bit confusing and I couldn't exactly follow what was going on......or was that how u wanted it to be?? I mean I don't mind when the characters in the fanfic are confused and the situation protraits chaos and stuff...but I think that scene would confuse the reader a bit.
that's all I could think about at the time Xanny....I'll get back to u on the rest after I read it a third time.
