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Originally Posted by Ace
It was great. Its really well written for being of the short story nature. It's better than Dyflons for many reasons one being it's not BASED ON A MOVIE as I can tell yet anyways. And two the intro is interesting IE the green "blood" oozing from wounds. Great intro. Ooh. and there is a 3 you almost pleased Ginkasa
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Thanks for the great feedback and comments, Ace! It touches me, right here. *points at heart*
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Originally Posted by GameMaster
Will my lying come at the expense of the live's of others?
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Probably
Also, for anyone interested, I named the girl Eden, because she is based on my girlfriend; Eden. But yeah, this story isnt based on any books or movies. Its straight out of my head, (scary, huh?)