09-11-2003, 06:55 AM
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Abra Kadabra
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It was great. Its really well written for being of the short story nature. It's better than Dyflons for many reasons one being it's not BASED ON A MOVIE as I can tell yet anyways. And two the intro is interesting IE the green "blood" oozing from wounds. Great intro. Ooh. and there is a 3 you almost pleased Ginkasa
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Thanks for the great feedback and comments, Ace! It touches me, right here. *points at heart*
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Will my lying come at the expense of the live's of others?
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Probably
Also, for anyone interested, I named the girl Eden, because she is based on my girlfriend; Eden. But yeah, this story isnt based on any books or movies. Its straight out of my head, (scary, huh?)
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09-11-2003, 09:23 AM
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Mr. Sarcasm
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No, what would be scary is if it is based off of your real life story.
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09-11-2003, 11:58 AM
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Tavern Legend
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Re: The Next Story, Part 2. Title: The Virus
very nice start...it's really...ummm...you know...stressfull? no...wait...god damn it! whats the word im lookin for...argh...you know...it makes you anticipate the next chapter...argh...whatever.
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09-11-2003, 12:27 PM
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Mr. Sarcasm
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very nice start...it's really...ummm...you know...stressfull? no...wait...god damn it! whats the word im lookin for...argh...you know...it makes you anticipate the next chapter...argh...whatever.
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Suspenseful.
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"Abortion is mean." - Rock For Life
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09-11-2003, 01:39 PM
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Tavern Legend
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Suspenseful.
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09-11-2003, 01:46 PM
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Mr. Sarcasm
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
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You're welcome.
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09-11-2003, 03:30 PM
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Excellent, Vampyr! I look forward to reading more of the story.
P.S. I wanna see how well Ginkasa writes. Based on his posts, methinks Crappy should've been his extra word and not mine ¦¬Þ
just kiddin' ya, Ginkie.
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