My Story

Hero2 · 09-07-2003, 04:39 PM

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Originally Posted by bouncer_agb

If you're going to do this I want some good english.

there aint be no need for goods english although i do receive alot of bad rep for bad English. Ohh well

Happydude · 09-07-2003, 04:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Hero2

there aint be no need for goods english although i do receive alot of bad rep for bad English. Ohh well

whaaaa?! -rep!

jk

VashTheStampede · 09-07-2003, 06:15 PM

sorry for delay. Computer shut down when i was typing it.. :\

Fighting this huge monstrous beast was going to be a pain in the arse. Or so they thought. Happydude666 pulled out his BFG and fired at the monstrous beast(who from now on shall be known as Fluffums) and destroyed it. Just when they other 3 were about to commend Happydude, 30 more Fluffums emerged from the ground and surrounded the team of four. Bouncer, seeing no alternative, placed a Canadian flag headband on his head, stripped himself, and charged at the enemy, filling them with lead and blowing them up with explosives. Dyne proceeded to throw apples at the Fluffums, whlie Yoda read his booklet on "How to Control a Kanchii" and happydude unloaded numerous BFG rounds at the Fluffums, but more continued to emerge from the ground. Bouncer began to just throw grenades at the ground and blow them up with his Big Machine Guns. Happydude, who ran out of BFG rounds, began to fire his assault rifle at the oncoming Fluffum horde. Dyne shoved some apples into his vacuum and fired apple sauce at the monsters, who seemed to be burned by the acidity of it. Yoda, finally finishing the booklet, called upon Kanchii, and was swallowed by it as it landed.

"Um, did Yoda just get swallowed by his own weapon?" said Dyne, looking at the Kanchii in suspicion.

"No time..look.." the nude bouncer pointed out as more larger Fluffums popped out....

to Be continued...

Rndm_Perfection · 09-07-2003, 08:13 PM

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Originally Posted by VashTheStampede

Yoda, finally finishing the booklet, called upon Kanchii, and was swallowed by it as it landed.

"Um, did Yoda just get swallowed by his own weapon?" said Dyne, looking at the Kanchii in suspicion.

Hmmm, if Yoda posts, I'm giving him +rep.

VashTheStampede · 09-07-2003, 09:16 PM

what do you guys think of the story? weird? bizarre? down right crazy? please tell me :-D so i can conform my writing to your needs

oh and the reason my last second part was so short was because i wrote that while being yelled at. My brother said i was typing too loud when he had his music on full blast..yet he can't hear me when i'm speaking loud 2 feet from him..o_O

Dylflon · 09-07-2003, 09:31 PM

It was the Canadian flag head band that gave bouncer his awesome power.

Go Canada!

Vampyr · 09-08-2003, 07:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Dyflon

The story is kinda stupid. Does anyone else think it's weird that Ginkasa doesn't complain about this story but he manages to complain whenever I post Battle Royale?

Im thinking the exact same thing.

VashTheStampede · 09-07-2003, 09:50 PM

I like the fact that people are interested in my story...360 views!! yay!! I'm starting school again so I'll be posting the rest of Chapter 2 tonight.
Chapter 2 Part 3: 6 ppl, a robot, and a floating head.

Dyne, bouncer, happydude, and the Kanchii that ate Yoda standed surrounded by larger Fluffums. Still disoriented about Yoda being devoured, the three fight clumsily as the Kanchii stands there. Happydude unloading more and more rounds of his assault rifle, Dyne shooting more apple sauce at them, and bouncer running around nude blowing up Fluffums.

Losing ground, the Fluffum horde becomes harder and harder to diminish.

"Hey you stupid robot! Why don't you help us?!" shouted Dyne at the still robot.

Suddenly the robots TV screen face glowed red, and a circular crosshair design appeared on it. Pulling a guitar out of it's face, the Kanchii began to smash the Fluffums 2 by 2. The rest of the group was amazed by what such a robot could do. Gaining more morale by the robot's abilities, the group began to fight harder against the horde.

But, such efforts were still futile. They were beginning to be overwhelmed.

"This is the end.." said Happydude, placing the assault rifle underneath his chin, ready to blow himself away...

"Um, I don't think so."

BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG!

"Yep"

BOOSH! BOOSH! BOOSH! (my lame excuse of a tank noise*

)

The group of four looked at the reinforcements that had come, Vash and Rndm_Perfection, both in Zebra's tank. But that could mean...that Zebra had indeed been killed in the fight up at the City of The North. Vash and Rndm emptied more rounds into the group of Fluffums. Their help had pushed back the Fluffum horde somewhat more. Vash jumped out of the tank, and emptied more rounds into the Fluffums. A Evolved Fluffum, which was about to jump Vash, was hit hard by a weird furry bullet of sorts.

"Huh?..what the heck?...Zebra?"

To Be Continued..

Ok So I lied about posting the rest of Chapter 2...I like cliffhangers

ZebraRampage · 09-07-2003, 10:37 PM

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Originally Posted by VashTheStampede

I like the fact that people are interested in my story...360 views!! yay!! I'm starting school again so I'll be posting the rest of Chapter 2 tonight.
Chapter 2 Part 3: 6 ppl, a robot, and a floating head.

Dyne, bouncer, happydude, and the Kanchii that ate Yoda standed surrounded by larger Fluffums. Still disoriented about Yoda being devoured, the three fight clumsily as the Kanchii stands there. Happydude unloading more and more rounds of his assault rifle, Dyne shooting more apple sauce at them, and bouncer running around nude blowing up Fluffums.

Losing ground, the Fluffum horde becomes harder and harder to diminish.

"Hey you stupid robot! Why don't you help us?!" shouted Dyne at the still robot.

Suddenly the robots TV screen face glowed red, and a circular crosshair design appeared on it. Pulling a guitar out of it's face, the Kanchii began to smash the Fluffums 2 by 2. The rest of the group was amazed by what such a robot could do. Gaining more morale by the robot's abilities, the group began to fight harder against the horde.

But, such efforts were still futile. They were beginning to be overwhelmed.

"This is the end.." said Happydude, placing the assault rifle underneath his chin, ready to blow himself away...

"Um, I don't think so."

BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG!

"Yep"

BOOSH! BOOSH! BOOSH! (my lame excuse of a tank noise*

)

The group of four looked at the reinforcements that had come, Vash and Rndm_Perfection, both in Zebra's tank. But that could mean...that Zebra had indeed been killed in the fight up at the City of The North. Vash and Rndm emptied more rounds into the group of Fluffums. Their help had pushed back the Fluffum horde somewhat more. Vash jumped out of the tank, and emptied more rounds into the Fluffums. A Evolved Fluffum, which was about to jump Vash, was hit hard by a weird furry bullet of sorts.

"Huh?..what the heck?...Zebra?"

To Be Continued..

Ok So I lied about posting the rest of Chapter 2...I like cliffhangers

Hey I might be alive again...interesting, that was a good edition, I especially liked the end...but of course I would. +rep

Hero2 · 09-07-2003, 10:20 PM

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Originally Posted by VashTheStampede

what do you guys think of the story? weird? bizarre? down right crazy? please tell me :-D so i can conform my writing to your needs

oh and the reason my last second part was so short was because i wrote that while being yelled at. My brother said i was typing too loud when he had his music on full blast..yet he can't hear me when i'm speaking loud 2 feet from him..o_O

thats when you take the keyboard and kick his ass with it then he cant complian about typing loud while hes complianing about the pain mahahahaha