The Next Story, Part 2. Title: The Virus

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Originally Posted by Vampyr

The girl spoke, “I am EDEN.”

Thus the first chapter ends. I havnt started to use any of the one word descriptions yet, but this is an introduction. How was it?

It was great. Its really well written for being of the short story nature. It's better than Dyflons for many reasons one being it's not BASED ON A MOVIE as I can tell yet anyways. And two the intro is interesting IE the green "blood" oozing from wounds. Great intro. Ooh. and there is a 3 you almost pleased Ginkasa