Battle Royale Finale

Blackmane · 09-12-2003, 08:57 PM

Wow, very exciting. Good job with the story.

DarkMaster · 09-12-2003, 09:04 PM

Victory is mine! Cool story Dylflon, I enjoyed reading it.

GameMaster · 09-12-2003, 09:10 PM

Encore! Encore!

But how did Talbain die? *cues mysterious song*

Dylflon · 09-12-2003, 09:14 PM

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Originally Posted by GameMaster

Encore! Encore!

But how did Talbain die? *cues mysterious song*

Uh...he was shot. Let's say it was in the head.

Now everyone is happy.

*Waits silently for Ginkasa's review.

Happydude · 09-12-2003, 09:38 PM

wow...just wow...although it could've been a little more suspensfull if you wrote a whole final chapter about the last 2 members

...but still it was...wow.

Dylflon · 09-12-2003, 09:46 PM

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Originally Posted by happydude666

wow...just wow...although it could've been a little more suspensfull if you wrote a whole final chapter about the last 2 members

...but still it was...wow.

Thanks for your positive feedback.

Rndm_Perfection · 09-13-2003, 12:18 AM

While I would have preferred a final shootout with Darkmaster rather than my end with Talbain, I congratulate you on the conclusion. ¦¬Þ

Well done

Ginkasa · 09-13-2003, 12:27 AM

What was with the switching of tenses? At one point it would be past (like the rest of the chapters) and other times it would be present tense.

You need to pick one and stick with it.

*shrugs and walks away*

ZebraRampage · 09-13-2003, 12:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Ginkasa

What was with the switching of tenses? At one point it would be past (like the rest of the chapters) and other times it would be present tense.

You need to pick one and stick with it.

*shrugs and walks away*

Aww come on Ginkasa, this was just for fun. Who cares if he didn't write it perfectly.

Dylflon · 09-13-2003, 01:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Ginkasa

What was with the switching of tenses? At one point it would be past (like the rest of the chapters) and other times it would be present tense.

You need to pick one and stick with it.

*shrugs and walks away*

I wanted to get a differnet perspective fore the last chapter. You know? I wanted to get in their heads a little more.

You act as if I was writing a serious piece of literature. You only say what I did wrong. You never say "Well, I like that you did this."

No. You don't.

I'm glad you got shot in the spine 3 times.