Battle Royale 2: Prologue

Dylflon · 09-21-2003, 07:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Ginkasa

Much better than the last one *thumbs up*

And not the least of which because I edited it

j/k

*shrugs and walks away*

Wait...just kidding that it's only good because you proof read it...or just kidding I did a good job of writing it?

Ginkasa · 09-21-2003, 07:28 PM

j/k about it only being good because I edited it...

*shrugs and walks away*

ZebraRampage · 09-21-2003, 08:17 PM

I KNOW WHO THE "DELIVERY" GUY WAS!!!!!! But I won't say to spoil it for anyone else....as if it isn't obvious enough, lol. I just feel like being stupid like that right now...anyway, good job Dyflon, there was a lot of detail, and you could picture it in your head. I have no doubt that this story will be better, and it will be good. Good luck writing it.

DarkMaster · 09-21-2003, 08:38 PM

That was really cool.

*spoilers I guess*

I continue to kick ass

Ginkasa · 09-21-2003, 08:53 PM

I don't know, you seem like a nervous little pawn who only does what people tells him to me.

But what do I know?

*shrugs and walks away*

Rndm_Perfection · 09-21-2003, 09:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Ginkasa

But what do I know?

Nothing.

First, he was put onto the island by force and managed to be the only one to get away alive. Then, he spearheads a revolt against the entire company. Single-handedly he walks a bomb into their "headquarters" (er, business building) and drops it off, risking his own life. Because he has little time and probably had absolutely no way to practice the escape route, he runs away with only 10 seconds of time left before the whole place engulfs in flames.

Nervous? How so, because he was running away from a bomb he planted to save himself?

Pawn? Of who, himself or the countless men he recruited?

Ginkasa · 09-21-2003, 10:50 PM

It just seemed to me that he wasn't the head guy. If I wanted to to plant a bomb somewhere, I would get one of the "countless men" I recruited rather than do it myself.

There's not really a lot to go on in this chapter alone. That's just the way I interpreted it.

And I happen to know quite a lot thank you.

*shrugs and walks away*